Preceding unsigned comment added by 150.254.181.174 ( talk This entry is worded in such a way that it paints Snood in a very positive light, while using the ever-so-dreadful weasle wording to skirt any possibly negative aspect of the game and failing to draw any comparisons to the quality and polish of any other Bust-A-Move clone. That of course, brings me to my second point. I believe it aught to be slimmed down to include information only immediately relevent to the game itself, and perhaps a few tidbits of trivia. The entry for Snood goes into far greater detail than is really necessary (and indeed more that other Bust-A-Move clones), citing such things as gamers' reactions to the game. ZeWrestler 10:05, (UTC) Should there be a note explaining that many who believe that the similarity to Puzzle Bobble is not a coincidence.
It looks better than I originally wrote it. 13:42, (UTC) I like the changes you made. Maybe this needs a second opinion, though. 13:39, (UTC) Okay, this might be because my brain is dead, but I can't discern very much similarity anyway.
Keep rewording it until there's no discernible similarity. ) VfD is getting far too full up these days. What is the legal status of the article now? It is not the same as the atpm review, but it is still remarkably similar, and it is clearly (in my mind) a derivative work. Unaware of that, I edited and rephrased it. I think this article was originally (poorly) paraphrased from this copyright review. 8 Fair use rationale for Image:Snood.gif.7 Fair use rationale for Image:Snood screenshot Palm.png.The following references may be useful when improving this article in the future: Other : *Current discussions (XFD's, mergers, etc.):.Be sure to add the articles to any appropriate task forces. articles and remove the " |auto=yes" parameter. Verify : Double check the classification of articles in Category:Automatically assessed Apple Inc.
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